Rhetorical Strategies
·
Asyndeton: “I was a guide, a pathfinder,
an original settler” (4).
·
Metaphor: “Twenty miles from the city a
pair of enormous eggs, identical in contour and separated only by a courtesy
bay…They are not perfect ovals…” (5).
·
Paradox: “…I was conscious of wanting to
look squarely at every one, and yet to avoid all eyes” (15).
·
Alliteration: “Amid the welcome
confusion of cups and cakes a certain physical decency established itself”
(87).
·
Imagery: “His brown, hardening body
lived naturally through the half-fierce, half-lazy work of the bracing days”
(98).
Fitzgerald
utilizes vivid descriptions as a way to emphasize what takes place in the
scenes of his novels. Generally, the literary tools he uses serve as ways to highlight
certain parts of his sentences or phrases that allow the author to depict an
image in greater detail. For example, when applying the asyndeton, the lack of
conjunctions puts emphasis on the nouns in the sentence. Doing so draws focus
to the nature of the narrator by removing words that would distract from that
goal, and allowing greater insight into the character of the narrator, Nick.
Furthermore, in the metaphor stated above, rather than simply describing the
shape of the islands, he refers to them literally as “a pair of enormous eggs.”
This works to develop a more vivid and clear image of the form of the islands
and, along with other descriptions within the passage, allows for a stronger
comprehension by emphasizing the landmasses as something other than themselves.
Other techniques used by Fitzgerald are also employed for the same purpose. In
creating the paradox on page 15, Fitzgerald highlights the thoughts of the
narrator, used to allow for a greater understanding of Nick’s character and
personality. The alliteration utilized by the author draws emphasis to the
repeated consonants within the passage, focusing the reader’s attention to the
objects at hand. Doing so allows for a greater and more vivid illustration of
the scene, rather than stating that the large quantity objects present at the
time. Lastly, the imagery presented utilizes a variety of adjectives to create
a detailed depiction of the man described. This use of adjectives and
descriptive wording constantly is seen throughout much of the novel, where
imagery is the tool most used by Fitzgerald, the others serving as various
means of achieving such detailed images.
Hey Danica! I think you have really good points in here, and some I would like to debate with you. I agree with your idea that the asyndeton used in the sentence regarding Nick's self-description puts additional stress on the nouns, as my brain is forced to actually READ every noun, with no filler or nonsense in between them. But I'd like to hear more reasoning behind your idea that the paradox about Nick wanting to look everywhere and nowhere gives the reader MORE understanding of Nick's character, as that sentence reads to me as the author trying to complicate Nick to the reader. I mean, what's the fun of a story told by someone you know everything about? But other than that, I really appreciated your ideas and believe that you should be very confident in your analytical abilities.
ReplyDelete